On this page, I would be posting drafts about my life-choice memoir. I would be talking about a very hard decision I made in my life and the experience I went through making this decision. This life-choice memoir is a non- fiction writing. A non- fiction is a writing that is factual and real. My paper is about my aunt passing away due to suffering from cancer and leaving behind four of her children. I had to be the one to break the news to them but I was put in a situation where I had to choose to either break the news or hide it from them. On this paper I would be explaining about how it affected me and if the decision I made was right or wrong.
When I started this paper it was a struggle for because I did not know how to start it. I had the idea of what to write about but it was difficult for me to write it down. I barely had time to get everything together because I did it last minute. My first draft was not the best, which I knew as well. So I decided to get it reviewed by my teacher and make corrections on everything I needed.
After getting a feedback from my professor, I worked on it again and edited my work. Mainly what I needed to make corrections on was to make the reader feel what I was feeling and make them a part of it. I went back and changed what I was told to do. The second time around when I asked my professor a feedback, he said I improved but needed a little more work to get my paper where I needed it to be. I am still working on my third draft but have not yet submit it. These are the links to my drafts: